Split Decisions

Apr 27, 2011 13:57



The two commanders faced the board. It held all the information for their upcoming and most important mission.

“Let’s run through the plan again.” Chloe said.

“Sullivan, we went through it a dozen times already.” Flagg said. He was annoyed by her attention to detail. It felt like a waste of his time.

Chloe sent him a sharp look. “Listen, ( Read more... )

chloe, collateral, oliver, season 10, chlollie, fanfiction, angst, drabble

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chlollielover April 27 2011, 19:28:00 UTC
I loved this little moment. It was something that should have been in Collateral our in a flashback of other episodes!!

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tenshinrtaiga April 28 2011, 02:22:51 UTC
huh. This was not something I thought about off screen wise. I guess I never really thought about what Chloe was thinking or feeling when she saw Oliver connected to the machine. Interesting take.

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saurina April 28 2011, 21:09:19 UTC
It may be more emotionally desperate than angsty, but I think that's what made it so thrilling. I could feel her desperation and therefor obvious need to rush things, but when it all began to go south, she snapped back and feel into WT mood in order to save them all.

And the part where she pleaded Flag to let her wake Ollie was one of the strongest moments for me. I liked how her desperation made her act out of character, especially in front of a man where it might very well be foolish to do so. I like canon-Flag even though he's a hard-ass who often acts as a dumb-ass. As always very well done sweetie, I loved this little sneak peak behind the rescue mission.

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