Fic: More Than A dream

Sep 12, 2007 11:48

Ok peeps, Mys decided it was time she tried her hand at a PWP- unfortunately I think it may have too much of one and not enough of the other, but hey it’s my first one.

Author: mystic
Title: More Than a Dream
Rating: FRAO
Type of Pairing/Relationship: SLASH
Pairing: Reid/Hotch

Warnings: OOC-ness, and bad writing

DISCLAIMER: Criminal Minds ( Read more... )

pwp, cm, slash, mtd

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empathy_apathy April 18 2008, 22:06:34 UTC
....if you call this "bad writing", then your "good writing" must really be something.

This piece shows a perfect sense of word choice, and a tactful grasp of how both smut and songfics ought to read. All you need is a beta for a few commas and "you're/your" and other things here and there, and some paragraphs.

All in all, well done. And if you're up for having a beta, I'd be glad to help. Keep it up!

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mystic_pantheon April 19 2008, 07:58:31 UTC
Wow, that's... wow, thank you!!!!!

And I may just take you up on the beta services when/if I ever get any of my other CM stuff finished.
Mys has discovered she has problems writing for non-OTPs and since she only has one true OTP (and it's in a completely unrelated fandom)... yeah she's been distracted by it for a while, lol.

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empathy_apathy April 19 2008, 12:39:40 UTC
Yeah, writing outside your OTP is definitely tough. D: But it shows discipline. All I've posted in the past year is Hotch/Reid, haha. No wonder I've got writer's block!

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ladyluvzslash April 26 2008, 16:36:00 UTC
Christ....more.

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mystic_pantheon April 26 2008, 17:07:28 UTC
Whoa, umm, thanks. *smiles sheepishly* Mys is actually trying to get back into her CM fic, she has a couple bunnies that have yet to stumble onto the highway so mayhaps they will find their way here soon(ish). Thanks again.

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