Ok peeps, Mys decided it was time she tried her hand at a PWP- unfortunately I think it may have too much of one and not enough of the other, but hey it’s my first one.
Author: mystic
Title: More Than a Dream
Rating: FRAO
Type of Pairing/Relationship: SLASH
Pairing: Reid/Hotch
Warnings: OOC-ness, and bad writing
DISCLAIMER: Criminal Minds
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This piece shows a perfect sense of word choice, and a tactful grasp of how both smut and songfics ought to read. All you need is a beta for a few commas and "you're/your" and other things here and there, and some paragraphs.
All in all, well done. And if you're up for having a beta, I'd be glad to help. Keep it up!
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And I may just take you up on the beta services when/if I ever get any of my other CM stuff finished.
Mys has discovered she has problems writing for non-OTPs and since she only has one true OTP (and it's in a completely unrelated fandom)... yeah she's been distracted by it for a while, lol.
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