Comments | mysticalangelz: My Backyard

mysticalangelz

My Backyard

May 13, 2006 17:45

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asian__angel May 13 2006, 09:35:09 UTC

I really like it because I can actually picture that back yard in my mind. ^__^

Go for it girl!! XD Enter that competition! ^__^

llama_89 May 13 2006, 09:48:37 UTC

I already know what your backyard looks like, but that poem pretty much creates the picture for anyone who doesn't know what it's like ^^.

susie_90 May 13 2006, 12:32:55 UTC

the poem is really good, go enter it
you have nothing to lose =]

oxym0ronic May 14 2006, 01:12:03 UTC

I love reading poems...I honestly think that one is really great. I love the rhyming, you have perfect words! What's the competition? At school? Enter it!