Finally caught up enough! I told myself, "Self, you're not going to bed until you get 20,000 words out there." Harsh words, I know. But it worked. Wordcount: 20,124
I really like the fact that Mara was finally able to communicate with the worker alien. And I like that Yuyu didn't take an extreme position. He stayed wary and oblivious to most of what she was trying to say, but didn't immediately think she was dangerous or dumb. Good characterization. :)
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