louis wants to ask, was this guy looking for something else, too, harry? but he keeps his mouth shut because questions like that only get him zayn’s sad eyes and Louis hates nothing more.
not her, please, no, what the fuck are you doing to me.
hang me up to dry, <3 <- straight through the heart, just kill me now love and leave me with Louis on the dancefloor.
and, also, a little, he wants to fuck him up because it wasn’t supposed to happen like this.
this is perhaps my favorite part of the whole fic. i feel so frustrated for Louis, and the situation, and I can imagine so perfectly him laying in bed with this person who is like a star to him and yet burning through him like the sun. just gorgeous and angry and it feels so incredibly real and true to life
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ASDALKDLASKDASKDLAS; INCOHERENCY ALL OVER THE PLACE. THIS IS SUCH A LOVELY COMMENT. I CANT STOP SMILINGGGG. FUCK. I FEEL SO GOOD THAT THIS IS POSTED AND DONE. AND THAT YOU LIKE IT. MY TEARS OF BLOOD HAVE DRIED UP NOW THAT IT'S ALL DONE.
i'm a twit, this is the beginning of the commentbeforeskylinesJuly 8 2012, 05:13:15 UTC
“you indie twat. this is a punk show, don’t you know?” harry doesn’t move, so louis keeps talking, just to keep him close. “no one in the world, except you, knows that song.”
harry laughs, loud, says, “you do,” with his big, innocent eyes and Louis can’t help but smile back at him.
I love this more than words, I feel as though it says so much about your boys right off the bat. it’s the first bit of establishment of the relationship you continue to build throughout the story. you do he says, an the reader knows that that’s the most important thing.
it makes him feel so fucking obvious, standing here in his smeared eyeliner, trying to get a boy to come home with him. it’s not the same thing, not really, but it might as well be.
I think i pointed out this part before, but i just love the image it paints. it’s so lonely, so desperate.
I'm absolutely in love with this. I just ached for Louis the whole time and it was all so gut wrenching and mesmerizing. Louis' pov was amazing and the way he understood Zayn and they related really got to me. I love the role music played in this, it just made everything that much more intense.I feel I can read this over and over and still discover new things to love. Thank you for sharing this!
I am barely coherent enough to reply to comments right now because I've been looking at this fic so much the past few weeks, my eyes have crossed, and it's 1AM. But I'll try. I'm so, so glad you liked this, and that it worked for you. I was a bit worried putting Louis and Zayn into similar situations, I didn't want it to come off drippy or overdramatic, so you mentioning that specifically is great. I also just took my own musical taste and projected it ALL OVER THE PLACE HERE, haha, I'm thrilled that you enjoyed that aspect. No, no, thank you for commenting and being so lovely about it. <3
I cant even describe how amazing this is! The feelings are just too real and realistic, and their relationship.. It was just WOW At the beginning my heart was breaking for my boobear ;( I'm sooo happy u made a happy ending, my heart would have broken otherwise Thank you!
ugh, omg, that is awesome to hear! i didn't want any of it to be too dramatic or unrealistic. that's my thing, angst with happy endings! thrilled that it worked for you! thank you so much for leaving the lovely comment. <3
ahmg, stop it, that is too kind! this is the first thing i've written in two years. all my 1d feelings are the reason this happened. ALL THE FEELINGS. thanks for commenting, doll. <333
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not her, please, no, what the fuck are you doing to me.
hang me up to dry, <3 <- straight through the heart, just kill me now love and leave me with Louis on the dancefloor.
and, also, a little, he wants to fuck him up because it wasn’t supposed to happen like this.
this is perhaps my favorite part of the whole fic. i feel so frustrated for Louis, and the situation, and I can imagine so perfectly him laying in bed with this person who is like a star to him and yet burning through him like the sun. just gorgeous and angry and it feels so incredibly real and true to life ( ... )
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harry laughs, loud, says, “you do,” with his big, innocent eyes and Louis can’t help but smile back at him.
I love this more than words, I feel as though it says so much about your boys right off the bat. it’s the first bit of establishment of the relationship you continue to build throughout the story. you do he says, an the reader knows that that’s the most important thing.
it makes him feel so fucking obvious, standing here in his smeared eyeliner, trying to get a boy to come home with him. it’s not the same thing, not really, but it might as well be.
I think i pointed out this part before, but i just love the image it paints. it’s so lonely, so desperate.
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eta: omg that icon is perf.
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The feelings are just too real and realistic, and their relationship.. It was just WOW
At the beginning my heart was breaking for my boobear ;(
I'm sooo happy u made a happy ending, my heart would have broken otherwise
Thank you!
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I would quote lines but id have to quote the whole thing
WHAAAAT GAHREJSJ MY FEELINGS
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