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mywholecry

You're Not Listening (2/2)

Aug 29, 2011 01:35

( Part Two: That morning, Brendon goes down to breakfast, and her parents act like nothing is different. )

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Comments 14

extemporally August 29 2011, 12:17:39 UTC

Oh my gosh, this is AMAZING. I really love how you got all that anger out there, how you made it so that they didn't win (didn't even place!), and what I love best is how you really got down how music is such a hugely important part of adolescence, especially when it's shitty. Your writing is beautiful, I love how crisp-yet-bitten-off it feels. I feel like this is the girl Brendon fic I've wanted to read all my time in bandom - putting her into the middle of the riot grrl scene is just right. Thank you for writing this, and thank you for sharing. ♥

mywholecry September 3 2011, 21:53:13 UTC

Oh my god, I love this comment. I've been kind of staring at it for a few days and clutching my hands and grinning at my computer trying to figure out what to reply, but I just want to say thank you for taking the time to read this and leave such a lovely, thoughtful comment. ♥

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mywholecry September 3 2011, 21:54:56 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad my girl!Brendon came off effectively. A big part of her is influenced by me in high school, so that means a lot that it wasm't horribly out of character and self-centered ♥

girlmarauders September 5 2011, 20:53:58 UTC

This is fantastic! I loved every second of reading it. It was quite painful at points but it always came across as real. The anger was brought across fantastically and I it was really, forgive the cliche, empowering to watch Brendon move from tired and lonely to independent and secure in herself.

A really fantastic, engagaing story, I loved it!

mindscomeloose September 6 2011, 22:09:00 UTC

forget my first comment: she said all I wanted to say.

girlmarauders September 6 2011, 23:27:49 UTC

rereading what I wrote, you probably would have made less spelling mistakes. /o\

mindscomeloose September 6 2011, 23:48:00 UTC

hahaha i am a spelling stickler, so yes. i'm known to make up words, though.

Thread 5

i caaaaaan't. mindscomeloose September 6 2011, 22:08:37 UTC

oh my goodness, girl!
this was PERFECT.
i can't even articulate it but this story was just so fantastic and raw and real and spot-on. i'm not even a Like fan and i loved watching z/tenn together. it was just flawless and lovely. great work. ♥

Re: i caaaaaan't. mywholecry September 7 2011, 02:52:29 UTC

I can't even articulate how much it means to me that you liked it, really ♥

Re: i caaaaaan't. mindscomeloose September 7 2011, 03:12:17 UTC

you're so welcome, doll!

Hello! jasasodesseya September 10 2011, 16:30:06 UTC

Hi! I feel kind of bad that its been so long since we talked but I was stalking your Lj and couldn't help myself. This fic is awesome and made me feel all righteously indignant. I guess it reminds me of being so confused and then being made at my family because I felt like I had to say I was straight even though I didn't know. I think my aunt's probably still think I can't keep secrets from them but they're also the last major people in my life who aren't aware I read gay sex on the internet because I feel like i can't tell them and that's not fair to me or anyone else involved.