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The Pin Anon-CommentFic Exchange: The Second

Mar 30, 2010 16:25

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THE SECOND
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Nice Day for a White Wedding (1/2) anonymous April 5 2010, 10:33:50 UTC

It had all started off so innocently. Best friends from the moment they laid eyes on each other, Jin all but lived on the Yamashita's sofa, a permanent, Akanishi-sized dent in the cushion. Rina had been so small then, blushing and scampering away whenever Jin was around, and the pair of them had thought her little crush was hilarious, teased her mercilessly for it until Yamapi's mother had scolded them.

Time had gone by so fast back then, days filled with classes from eight in the morning until nine at night, biology, english, maths, dance, vocals, gym. Dinner was wolfed down during the walk from school to work, because by the time they arrived home just before ten, they were too tired to do anything more than shower and fall into bed - usually the same one.

It's not all that different now, except the hours are longer and when he collapses onto his bed, it's always empty.

Yamapi doesn't remember when me and Jin became Jin and I, when he'd gone from being a slightly selfish child to the polite young man everyone expected him to be ( ... )

Nice Day for a White Wedding (2/2) anonymous April 5 2010, 10:34:35 UTC

Yamapi's mother is over the moon when he finally proposes, and when Rina tells them the date over dinner, Yamapi smiles and congratulates them just like he should. While the women are fawning over the ring sparkling on Rina's finger, Jin frowns gently, questioningly across the table at him, and Yamapi hates that he still loves the way Jin can read him like a book. He excuses himself with a nod of apology under the pretence of an early start in the morning, and escapes before Jin can start asking questions ( ... )

Re: Nice Day for a White Wedding (2/2) lineelu2001 April 5 2010, 13:54:22 UTC

"I'm sorry, he's saying, turning his back. Yamapi can feel the world crashing down around him and this, this is so much worse than not knowing.

You took too long."

This broke my heart. T-T

Thank you for the commentfic!

Re: Nice Day for a White Wedding (2/2) myxstorie April 14 2010, 02:16:30 UTC

I'm sorry~ thank you for reading :D ♥

OP tatoeba April 5 2010, 14:10:14 UTC

T__________________________________T OMG. OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG. A;LSKDNG;ALSDKNG;ALSDKGA;SLDG THIS. IT'S PERFECT. I-I DON'T EVEN HAVE THE WORDS FOR IT. YAMAPI'S LOVE IS SO BITTERSWEET, JIN AND RINA DATING IS JUST CUTE, AND THEN THE ENDING, OMG. THEY KISS AND JIN'S YOU TOOK TOO LONG OH MY GOD. ;ASLKDNG;ALSGDA ;___________________________; SOBBING.

ANON-SAN THANK YOU SO, SO MUCH. THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL AND PERFECT AND I LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT. A;SLKDGNALSDG ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

Re: OP anonymous April 5 2010, 14:13:27 UTC

lklkaslkda;slkd THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR REQUESTING. I WOKE UP THIS MORNING, SAW YOUR PROMPT, FLAILED, AND SPENT THE NEXT HOUR UNABLE TO GET BACK TO SLEEP BECAUSE I COULDN'T STOP WRITING IT IN MY HEAD XD

This is totally my favourite prompt so far, ilusm for requesting it (and really, I should have known it was someone like you ^_~ *creepy* )

Re: OP myxstorie April 14 2010, 02:17:58 UTC

I STILL LOVE YOU FOR THIS PROMPT. THANK YOU ♥

Re: OP tatoeba April 14 2010, 02:19:54 UTC

OMG I HAD A FEELING IT WAS YOU BUT I WASN'T SURE. A;SLKDNGASG VIX THANK YOU. I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING IT. ;___; IT WAS PERFECT. ♥

Re: Nice Day for a White Wedding (2/2) anonymous April 5 2010, 14:23:58 UTC

my heart... give it back ;__;

that was beautiful, thank you!

Re: Nice Day for a White Wedding (2/2) changetje April 5 2010, 15:15:33 UTC

kflaskd;laskd;lsa ANON, YOU JUST BROKE MY HEART ;_; That was so beautiful, but at the same time heart-breaking. Especially you took too long/

Thanks for writing, anon-san *_*

Re: Nice Day for a White Wedding (2/2) myxstorie April 14 2010, 02:18:30 UTC

alksdjalksd THANK YOU ;_; ♥

Re: Nice Day for a White Wedding (2/2) anonymous April 5 2010, 18:06:12 UTC

I loved the prompt to begin with but maaaan, I loved this to tiny little pieces. The ending, their silent exchange and sfjwnbef Jin not saying anything, not needing to say anything, like that bond between them is what breaks Pi's heart, in the end :'< but I loved it in my little masochistic heart, thank you

Re: Nice Day for a White Wedding (2/2) sashjun April 5 2010, 23:32:43 UTC

;_;
wait this one
T_T

this was so bitter sweet, I want to hug them both D: it was great!

Re: Nice Day for a White Wedding (2/2) myxstorie April 14 2010, 02:21:40 UTC

♥ thank you~

Re: Nice Day for a White Wedding (2/2) sashjun April 14 2010, 07:20:01 UTC

should have known this was you <3333

Re: Nice Day for a White Wedding (2/2) tinyangl April 6 2010, 04:36:35 UTC

Oh. oh. this made me so so sad. even though I ship Jin/Rina like nobody's business, the whole thing was so bittersweet that I just wanted everyone to be happy somehow. D: It was beautiful regardless.

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