Comments | mz_bstone: REQUEST FOUR (?) for Dine: Firefly

mz_bstone

REQUEST FOUR (?) for Dine: Firefly

Mar 10, 2004 18:02

Dine said:

Firefly - Simon/Jayne

jealousy/envy
compare/contrast their backgrounds

I've no idea if this will suit. But here it is.

( Every Mother's Son )

Comments 16

spike21 March 10 2004, 21:05:28 UTC

I loved that, Brighid! Both of them are spot on and the mood feels exactly like the show.

ooooh, it's exactly like! dine March 10 2004, 21:53:59 UTC

this is perfection - you've captured both of them beautifully, and Jayne is so extremely Jayne-ish. I'm tickled that the dialogue includes chinese; details like that make it so wonderfully close to the feel of the series.

thank you!

agentotter March 11 2004, 00:35:07 UTC

That was terrific. and it had Jayne's hat! What's not to love?

Elynross quoted my favorite line. Very, very cool.

coffeeandink March 11 2004, 04:03:17 UTC

That is just lovely, and catches them both in a few perfect moments.

jacquez March 11 2004, 15:53:12 UTC

I enjoyed that very much; I think I like Jayne's mother.