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May 13, 2006 20:19

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amdaz May 14 2006, 01:56:31 UTC
Aww ... this is so angsty.
Love the last 2 paragraph, the build up to it is very good too.

Thank you.

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big_heart_june May 14 2006, 14:50:42 UTC
Oh Jess - this was heartbreakingly beautiful - soo sweet.

I loved this line:
This is what he waited
months for…these few moments when Jack was sound
asleep and he could love and cuddle and sniff to his
heart’s content.. storing memories for the coming
drought like a squirrel gathering nuts for the winter

Thanks soo much for writing this
June - Bigheart

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bbm_citygirl May 14 2006, 17:42:46 UTC
This is so lovely. Jack feigning sleep trying to give Ennis a "safe space" to let out some feelings and to get a bit of emotional sustance for himself seems so like Jack. Just lovely.

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lolitaray May 15 2006, 10:02:59 UTC
That was just gorgeous Jess...and so sad but tender as well. :)

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bcatjr March 19 2007, 12:55:15 UTC
What a beautiful piece.

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