Ryman Legacy 17A Part 9

[mzyra]

Chapter 17A finally finished!

Part 9 only for those who have read all the previous parts

Now to collapse and sleep forever

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[katrisims]

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Uh oh, it looks like Hideki is pretty fed up with Dalton. I suppose this was going to happen sooner or later... Poor Dalton, he's in a horribly tight spot...

When I started realizing, what Dalton would do, I couldn't decide whether to be all "no Dalton, no!" or "yes, Briney, yes!". It's of course going to land Dalton in deep deep trouble if he gets caught, but on the other hand, having Briney on free foot is awesome, already because Briney, and to think of it, with his ability, he'd be pretty damn useful in getting Hideki down if he were to commit himself to the cause...

Yes, Dalton and Madeline, run, run, run! Oh dammit!

A chilling turn of events. So now I suppose everyone is in even more danger than before. And since Briney took the elixir with him, Hideki is presumably going to need more soon, so there's death to be expected... (At least he doesn't seem to be immediately killing Dalton or Madeline, right? Right?) On the other hand, Briney is on the loose, so maybe, just maybe the other side has a chance...
Awesome update again

[mzyra]

^.^
[Spoiler (click to open)] Yeah, Dalton either had to learn to get good at torture fast, or suffer the consequences. Easier said than done, however...

If only Briney would stick around long enough to figure out what's happening rather than NOPE-ing right out of there as soon as he knows he's still being used as an elixir machine...

Originally I planned to have Briney smash the machines, but I couldn't find the OMSPs for having objects at different angles so they could be knocked over (and it probably wouldn't have worked), so the idea is that Briney drained it and left rather than have it be in ostensibly the wrong hands.

Thanks - planning to write more on holiday ^.^ <3