This is wonderful! I hope there will be more. I rented "Fifty First Dates" again just last week, so my DH could see it. It's one of my favorite rom-coms and he is a big fan of Adam Sandler and Drew Barrymore, so he really enjoyed it. This was another excellent chapter. Kudos!
I'm so happy you wrote a new chapter, and how rich is this chapter! A lot of emotions, from the great news that Danny was going to be a cop again, to his disapointment at Steve's reaction in the shop... How terrible it must be to be with someone who forgets you every day... I loved that Steve suddenly realised that dating someone meant he needed to take care of that person and show his appreciation! Also, I'd love to read Steve's notebook ;)! Steve's father is great in this, not at all like in the show, and it's all the better! All the others are very much in character, though. Thanks for this new chapter, you were not forgotten, and it would be awesome to have more soon!!
This is such a wonderful story I was so pleased to see another chapter. I do love the way Steve is trying so hard to capture his memories, it must be devastating for him when it doesn't work and he has to re-learn it all on a daily basis. Danny is so good for him and I really hope they can work things out.
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This was another excellent chapter. Kudos!
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