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[n8tastrophe]

The “SPLOOSH” of the icy water broke his slumber into pieces and his glazed eyes widened instantaneously. As he adjusted and regained focus, he looked around at the dark, solid bricks that enveloped him. The brightest of lights most unpleasingly shone into his face, disturbing any chance of calm. A newly-shattered reverie was fresh in his mind,

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[halfshellvenus]

I would kind of like to know who kidnapped that poor guy, and what "highborns" are in this context and why the bearded guy hated them so much.

[rayaso]

You set up the beginning with so many interesting, unanswered questions that I'm sure you'll be able to answer if there are future installments. I loved the phrase "cognitive faculties returned to home-row position."

[sinnamongirl]

I hope that "maybe" is converted into a "definitely" to be continued!

[baxaphobia]

I want to know how he is going to get out of this situation!

[murielle]

You know, I like the style of this piece. Stream of consciousness totally worms with the story.

Good job!