Resolution

Sep 29, 2019 17:39


Skepticism covered Kenneth’s face like grease paint on wee circus person. “Well…. It’s quite a bit more than I was gonna spend.”  The smarmy sales rep looked at him as if he had just watched him swallow a fistful of thumbtacks. “Hey, my man.  This “Quite a bit more” you speak of (yes, he air-quoted) is half the price of what you’d normally pay any ( Read more... )

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marlawentmad September 30 2019, 03:31:09 UTC

This is delightfully outrageous!

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alcat666 September 30 2019, 03:52:00 UTC
ooof good one

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static_abyss September 30 2019, 18:16:39 UTC
Oh, Ken. The ending was amusing and I really like your storytelling voice. I could hear it like it was being read to me. Well done!

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rayaso October 1 2019, 17:45:29 UTC
I was not expecting that end. And the moral of your story is certainly a good one. Lots of fun to read.

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murielle October 2 2019, 03:06:43 UTC
That last line! LOL! You totally had me! Very well done! Great to have you back!

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