Impossible

[n8tastrophe]

Lieutenant Stafford rubbed his brow with his nicotine fingers. Beads of sweat visibily dripping from his brow, now furrowed from the thick yarn he felt was being shoveled to him on his third consecutive shift. He let out an evidently labored sigh as he continued his seemingly futile line of questioning.

“Look, kid, you now have received four times

Comments

[rayaso]

I would think that that particular quadfecta would create an implosion, rather than an explosion, and might cause the first human black hole. This very funny with a great lead up to big moment.

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[millysdaughter]

I wonder which of the boys was my son?

[elderwoodpixie]

Great story, but I have to say, eeewwww! yuck, yuck, yuck! Now I can't get that image out of my mind.

[alexanderscttb]

That was hilarious--
Punchline had an interesting rhythm, almost like an anti-climax but still hilarious, in an understated way.

[n8tastrophe]

Yeah. To be honest, I could've (and would've) fleshed it out a great deal, but I finished it right at the deadline, so due to time constraints, it was what it was. Thanx for enjoying it.

[alexanderscttb]

In this case, at least according to my reading of it, maybe the time constraints worked to your advantage. As I honestly really liked the offbeat rhythm of the punchline. After all, seemed like the Lieutenant himself was in a hurry to get the whole episode over with, right? I feel like that really came across. Like, okay, open and shut-- gotta go. Yet, wait, in fact this will still haunt me. I have no idea how to just shut the case on this.

[halfshellvenus]

Hahahaha! I get such a kick out of your loony characters.

Poor Jasper, though that was a spectacularly bad idea.

Fake Care Bear and batteries... as usual, I think I need more of that story. For reasons...;)