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Nov 25, 2019 18:41


“Feckless? That’s not a word, is it?”  I exclaimed with actual curiosity. “Yes, it’s a word” snapped Mortimer, “And that’s a triple word score, BEEEOTCH!!” Mortimer was a very sore winner with a lexicon much larger than mine (and the reason I know the word lexicon, he used it to beat me in last week’s scrabble match), of course he was 96, he’s ( Read more... )

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sunouttomorrow November 26 2019, 21:17:53 UTC
Well that took an unexpected twist. Loved it!

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rayaso November 27 2019, 18:38:02 UTC
I love Mortimer and a squad of elite elder mercenaries! This was crazy and all kinds of silly, especially the battle scene. I kept playing it out in my mind with standard movie special effects, but slowly, because, after all, these guys are old. Anyone who can throw Scrabble tiles like ninja stars gets my respect.

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alycewilson November 27 2019, 23:58:23 UTC
Clever and fun, especially how you set it in the future and tell us about when without giving us the date. The fact that he's in his 90s and talking like a rapper from the 90s means it must be about 50 years from now or so, I'm guessing.

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roina_arwen November 28 2019, 00:07:46 UTC
Very cool story!

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banana_galaxy November 28 2019, 17:10:42 UTC
Wow this was a real unexpected twist. I enjoyed the turn though.

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