Jugga-Lowdown Girty Shame

Feb 01, 2020 18:02


Due to time limitations, I'll make the best with a quick hot-mess. enjoy.

The scent of orange FAGO and grease paint was heavy in the night air. “This is my destiny” she repeated internally, reveling in the moment. To Girty, nothing could be more poetic than an evening rife with raunchy dry humps and broken English, ironically fueled by about 2 ( Read more... )

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static_abyss February 2 2020, 00:47:55 UTC
I like the details here. There's so much description it almost feels tangible. Really well done.

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karmasoup February 2 2020, 19:58:08 UTC
Yikes. Real world dangers of a late 70s punk mosh pit.

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murielle February 4 2020, 22:38:17 UTC
Your ability to create place and person so vividly in spite of time limitations is admirable.

Kudos!

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sunouttomorrow February 5 2020, 01:10:13 UTC
Very detailed picture for time constraints. This kind of embodies everything I always feared when my teenage daughters went to a rave. Luckily they made it through those years ok. Mostly.

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alycewilson February 5 2020, 21:38:22 UTC
For such a short piece, this captures a mosh pit extremely well!

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