The Streisand Effect

[n8tastrophe]

James puffed away on his afternoon J, all the while trying to vanquish the Crohn's  demon deep inside of him.  Chimichanga day was never a good idea for someone in his condition, but the intoxicating allure of Mrs. Doyle's "El Scorcho Sauce" Yet again made him forget about the vile intestinal penance awaiting him in such a way that it almost seemed

Comments

[adoptedwriter]

Oh wow! I enjoyed this read, but Wow! The "voice" / dialogue was superb.

[alycewilson]

Wow. The voice in this story was extremely well done and very engrossing. I like that it ended up with a happier ending than might have been expected.

[karmasoup]

I love everything about this so much! My sister-in-law has Crohn's, so that was an interesting start, but the bunsen burner incident, oh man, you really started to heat up with that. Also, the morale... just fabu, dude, totes fabu!

[halfshellvenus]

It was hard going-- you nearly TMI'd me to death-- but I stuck with it, and the ending did not disappoint!

[banana_galaxy]

Wow. Way to talk him down!