Title: We Meet Again (1/4)
Pairing: John/Sherlock ( Alphabetically)
Word count: ~ 16,500 overall. ~3000 this part.
Rating: R
Beta : The awesome
hopeinashesSummary: In a world world where vampires and human co exist (mostly), being a personal donor to a vampire was a highly coveted position. Unfortunately for John Watson, he didn't share that opinion.
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Thank you for someone still knowing about the order before and after the /
I smiled at the (alphabetically)
Edited to say that while I see why you need that scene with the airport official, it really goes against my grain that John would come home on a commercial flight. Shouldn't he be going on a military machine?
But then I'm no soldier and no people who've been to Afghanistan only very distantly, so it might be common.
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Hmm... if he was returning directly from Afghanistan then yes he would be on a military machine, but I wrote it like John was returning from a long stay at a Dubai hospital during which he was officially discharged.So I wasn't really sure about an ex army officer hitching a flight on a military machine. The scene with the airport official could have easily been done with a military official, but i imagined it with a civilian one. I suppose I wanted to bring out the abrupt change of status.
Or you could just assume that in this universe the military doesn't care about veterans. ;)
I hope you enjoy the rest of the story! let me know if anything else seems out of place, i'l be happy to clear it up. <3
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