Comments | n_maranda_coy: LJ Idol, Season 7, Week 2

n_maranda_coy

LJ Idol, Season 7, Week 2 - Deconstruction.

Nov 11, 2010 10:58

Loosened bolts. Abandoned screws, gathering dust in corners. Broken joists, riddled beams, rotting lintels, disintegrating gingerbread ( Read more... )

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courtney_ke November 14 2010, 00:58:38 UTC

awesome post. The last line was so powerful!

lawchicky November 14 2010, 15:17:11 UTC

Ouch! I didn't see that coming!

awriterswindow November 14 2010, 15:37:59 UTC

Concise and powerful. Really great writing.

drjeff November 14 2010, 17:40:36 UTC

Loved this. Left me wanting more, but not needing more. That's not very easy to do.

thaliontholwen November 14 2010, 21:41:39 UTC

Geez, I feel like I'm the one who got hit with the hammer! Nice job, and great story :)