LJ Idol Exhibit A - Week 1 - Am I Crazy?

[n_maranda_coy]

"Why here

Comments

[lrig_rorrim]

This was really, really good. You put me right into the scene, very efficiently, and then gave me the shivers right along with your characters. Well done!

[n_maranda_coy]

Thank you! In offline life I tend to get too convoluted in my anecdotes, so i've been working on a tighter focus for my writing.

[myrna_bird]

Spooky but sounds like fun, too!

[n_maranda_coy]

So many people love to scare themselves. Thaks for reading!

[roina_arwen]

This didn't go where I thought it would at the beginning, but I like where it wound up. Very nice!

[n_maranda_coy]

Ooooh, where did you think it would go? :::curious::::

Thank you for reading!

[roina_arwen]

I'm not absolutely sure where I thought it was going, I guess I expected it would be more sinister, what with being in the basement of an old dorm, if that makes sense? :)

[halfshellvenus]

Creepy... Especially effective because at the point where she zoned out and let 'something' (autopilot or ??!??) take over, there are very sinister possibilities underneath!

[n_maranda_coy]

Thank you! The ambiguity of WHAT was actually happening is where I'd hoped to go with this.

[n_maranda_coy]

Thank you! I'm glad the mood worked.