Update

[naberzhood]

Well, I've never gotten any feedback here on this story, but my writer's workshop has given me things to work on. I don't think the story has moved forward at all, but it is fleshed out more so that it makes better sense... I think. Anyway, if you are interested, here it is - a little wonky in the format because I'm copy/pasting it

Comments

Wow

[mamag49]

It is very long - some of the stories makes sense to me - I do feel a connection to the characters. I know how they must feel like.