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Breakeven (1/?)

May 10, 2009 23:22

TITLE: Breakeven
AUTHOR: naddypants
RATING: 15
CHARACTERS: Ianto and Jack. Don't worry they'll get together in the end!
SUMMARY: With Lisa gone and Ianto left alone with a baby in a cold hospital, his life feels like its about to end. But will it?
WARNINGS: Completely and utterly AU. Turn back now if you don't like AU...
A/N: Not much to say really, but ( Read more... )

breakeven, ianto jones, au, janto, jack

Comments 33

alexthai May 10 2009, 22:38:11 UTC

Interesting!

naddypants May 12 2009, 17:43:26 UTC

Thanks for reading!

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naddypants May 12 2009, 17:44:05 UTC

Thanks! :)
Well then, I'll get onto writing the next chapter! :)

Oh all will be revealed in good time!

just_being_me08 May 10 2009, 23:14:26 UTC

You prawn!! *hugs you lots and lots* I am honoured that you are "blaming" TOATA for this fic! I mean...you are an AU natural, if you asks me. And your dedi, yes you come to Sheffy right now for that hug, otherwise I'm going to have to come over to you myself! Lolz, I still meant what I said. Someday me and thee will see blue gillespie live someday ( ... )

naddypants May 12 2009, 18:16:09 UTC

Oh Sian!! *huggles you lots* You really are far too kind to me! And I'd be over on the next flight if I could! And on the Blue Gillespie note; I'm counting on it! ;)

Oh noes! Don't wibble! That means crying soon! *hands over tissues* But really? From a first chapter? My goodness woman! I'm amazed you could relate though, that's a major thing I was worried about, but the fact it's believable, woah. :)

Oh I know. Poor Lisa. :( I fear there's more of her story to come...

Haha I couldn't leave it utterly bleak now could I? And obviously Jack was the best option. ;) As for the coat...I couldn't leave it out. It's like a security blanket! :P

Hahhaaa no don't! *huggles* I'm not sure what to say. I'm just bowled over!

Awww I appreciate it sweetie! :D And well...John....*flails* And thank you sweetie! As for the dedi? My pleasure! You do deserve it!

Oh dearie me! You do spoil me sweetie! As for Jack and Ianto...they might come in useful. ;)

love,
Naddy
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

hab318princess May 11 2009, 18:43:39 UTC

loved that and you have Ianto's emotions down to a T (I had a little one in special care baby unit and could emphasise with all of them)

naddypants May 12 2009, 18:18:14 UTC

Oh my! Thank you sweetie!
I really wasn't sure about the emotions, but they were as close as I could get down after working in the children's hospice.

samueljames May 11 2009, 20:11:26 UTC

Well you made me cry a little. I can see Ianto being an amazing Dad and hope he'll get to take Cerys home soon.

naddypants May 12 2009, 18:18:40 UTC

Oops. *hands over tissues*
Awww thank you! I'm glad you liked.