Biting Your Lip (2/?) [Series: No Regrets]

[naddypants]

TITLE: Biting Your Lip
AUTHOR: naddypants
RATING: 15
CHARACTERS: Jack/Ianto, team.
SUMMARY: Ianto's feelings a few hours, maybe days after Lisa dies. (1st Person)
AUTHOR'S NOTES: 1. My NaNo died. 2. I forgot the finale to Fading Yourself and 3. I decided to finally get this fic on the road. Inspired by the band Steer Clear, and I will be finishing

Comments

[just_being_me08]

Naddy, I officially love you.

This.....god, how the hell do I even begin to try and describe it? Like Ianto, I shall try, somehow....

You are so into his head... seriously, I'm not sure when my voice stopped reading this in my head and Ianto's started, but it happened somewhere. Everything, all the torment he's suffering, all the hate that he bears for Jack but at the same time the intoxication he feels from the Captain. It's incredible how you got all that across. God, where he describes what he feels for Jack....I thought that it would make me feel sorry for him, but it didn't. Somehow you made all that irrational hate justifiable. If that makes sense.

Lisa had an ego.
Jack has an ego bigger than most galaxies.
Lisa was unfaithful more than once.
Jack will shag anything if it stays still long enough.
Yeah, that bit? ^^^ absolutely made of win. I love that take on Ianto and Lisa! :D

[naddypants]

Awwww! :)

Woahh...thanks!! :)

I am? Awww. That's good. I'm glad you can read it like that! Yeah. Poor boy's terribly confused! *squish hugs for Ianto* But incredible? Woahh. *blushes* And...just...woahh, thank you! :)

And I'm glad you thought that bit was good. I was slightly worried that people wouldn't like Lisa having an ego and being unfaithful. I guess I'm basing the chappys pretty close to the songs they're from. I completely forgot about the lyric
Please tell me why it is: unfaithfullness and ego turns you on? until pretty much I replied!

But I'm so glad you loved it! :)

love naddy
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

YAY DOCTOR/MASTER. *happy dance*

[thrace_adams]

I agree with just being me08 - you are so into his head. I could hear Ianto's voice as I was reading this and the pain and the bitterness is just so raw. This is so well done. I'm very much looking forward to more.

[naddypants]

Really? I'm so glad that people are thinking that! :)
I'm so glad people are really enjoying this! Thanks!

[laurapetri]

Gah what can I say other than brilliant brilliant brilliant
fantastic fantastic fantastic

[naddypants]

Woahh! Thank you!
*blushes furiously*

[bardlover6]

Wow. Just wow. You have a great feel for the interiority of Ianto.

[naddypants]

Wow. Thanks.
I really appreciate that! :)

[missthingsplace]

Wow ... this is just ... brilliant!

[naddypants]

Woah...I'm really honored that people think this!
Thank you so so much!