Fanfiction- The End Where I Begin

Aug 20, 2009 08:39

She drops her keys, skirting from the front door to the bedroom following the muffled ring of the telephone. There, underneath a heap of unworn clothes, washed and waiting to be folded she finds it and pushes the talk button.

“I’m in Seattle.” He blurts.

His voice is clear on the receiver. Perhaps too clear. When he repeats himself she ( Read more... )

jacob/ leah, fanfic, birthday gift

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rosegilmore August 20 2009, 22:14:18 UTC
Awwww!! This was absolutely gorgeous!! I read while listening to the song on repeat (i lovee the script and think that almost the whole cd can be fore j/l).
Just awww, this is like maybe the 4th fic that gives a realistic happy ending for jake and leah. so sweet! i absolutely loved it.
Jake and Leah where in so in character and i really thought you had a good back story for how he broke the imprint and came back for leah. :)

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beautyfrompain August 21 2009, 04:55:45 UTC
*FLAILSSSSSS*

omg, woman. SERIOUSLY! Okay, not only is that possibly one of the best presents EVER(lol and i'll forget the fact that you started it before my birthday ;D), but that has to also be one of the best BlackWater fics I have read in awhile as well. No joke. That was stunning. You had me captivated the entire time. The plot, concept behind it all, your handle on the characters, the detailed language, the way it's written... you get the point... all of that was AMAZING!!

Aww, seriously, I love them so much, you did a fantastic job at capturing what could have easily happened after BD -- YAY! haha.

P.S. you're the best, and I kind of love you a lot, kthnx. ♥

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adahleah August 25 2009, 02:38:10 UTC
wow, great story!!

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