FANFICTION CORNER: PURLOINED LIGHT

[nadesico_chan]

       A sensation awoke me that night. It was not a noise, not even a shift of temperature in the room, but rather the sensation that something was trying to get through my closed eyelids, prying them open. It wasn’t forceful though, more like a discreet invitation whispered to my drowsy senses. At first all I could see was silence. A dark,

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[eleawin]

Haaa, j'ai peur de comprendre la fin ! Mais l'espèce de contraste entre Kangin et Shiwon, ténèbres/lumière est joliment décrit. C'est un beau texte, mais cruel - intéressante interprétation du prompt xD

C'est cool que tu ne sois plus dans ton passage à vide x)

[nadesico_chan]

Et oui^^ Je pouvais pas imaginer une autre issue, Siwon qui est profané, c'est comme une mort que kangin lui inflige. en perdant sa pureté il perd son essence.
Merci beaucoup!Je suis contente que tu ai apprécié!j'ai hâte de lire à mon tour *sort ses pompoms*

[coda_leia]

I must say... Wow
I love how you describe Kangin's thoughts. His envy and jalousy, his seek of touching the holiness even if the only way is to destroy it.
I felt the force of the storm in his head and heart.
I'm not a fan of yaoi, you know that but I loved and undrestood your characters' way of thinking.
Great work lass !
Keep it up (it's an order :p)

[nadesico_chan]

Man I just love you so much^^ You understood it so well*hugs tightly* I know you don't like yaoi so I appreciate you took your time to read and comment, thank you tomodachi!!

[nadesico_chan]

I'm afraid he did , because for Kangin's there is no way back once he touched him*runs and hides in a corner*
Thanks for reading and commenting^____^

[danceinthedark]

Oh. Wow.

That was so good!!!! ^____^ worth the wait

[nadesico_chan]

Really? you don't think I've betrayed your prompt? I have to admit I interpreted it in a very personnal way, and I was afraid to write and post it, that's why it took me so long. I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and I'm sorry for the long long wait^___^

[danceinthedark]

I do think so. How you use a prompt is all interpretation and the best prompts are usually written in the most unique ways ^_^ Don't worry about the wait :P How many times have I told you that? XD

[nadesico_chan]

Yeah I know, but really it tortured me , all the time I took to write it because I know I'm the queen of procrastination, I should more relax about that, and I was worried about your reaction... But in the end I have to thank you because your prompt cured my block, and I feel like writing a lot again^___^ I want to read you too^^

[yoochuns_lover]

This is really good.................but i'm confused about one thing..............did kangin kill siwon or did he just knock him out somehow?

[nadesico_chan]

The end is confusing on purpose, but if you want to know my logic in this, Kangin kills Siwon because the whole situation is a dead-end. He desires Siwon for his pureness and sanctity , and according to his own twisted logic, he thinks that as soon as he lays a finger on him, he'll start desecrate him and destroy him,and then he can't no longer desire/envy Siwon if he is no longer pure, and this is why he desires/hates him in a first place: because Siwon is evrything he isn't. Does it make sense? In my perverse twisted mind^____^
Thanks for reading and commenting!!

[yoochuns_lover]

OH i got it now........yeah i thought he killed him but then i was like 'i better ask'.............lol..........UR WELCOME!!!!!

[nadesico_chan]

Lol it's good you asked, it shows you are interested in my piece and that makes me awfully happy. I think it's the first time I kill a character... Thanks for commenting!!*hugs*