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xxpiripirixx May 19 2010, 18:22:39 UTC
Uwah! Poor ruki T_T

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nadiaz89 May 19 2010, 18:32:44 UTC
I'm crying too, and i'm the one who wrote it T.T sob sob...

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manabou May 19 2010, 18:35:08 UTC
Awwhhh... Ruki is sooo sweet, such a bastard :)
Poor him, I feel so bad about him. He seems so unhappy with everything :( But he's starting to talk to Uruha. And that's reaally good ^^ Thank you, I like reding this. Ruki's personality always makes me laugh :D

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nadiaz89 May 19 2010, 18:39:03 UTC
Ur welcome... I am glad I could make you laugh, and go through an emotional adventure with Ruki here~ =3

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angeldemon1 May 19 2010, 20:00:10 UTC
I actually liked this chapter a lot.

Don't get me wrong, I like badass Ruki too xD but it was really nice to see Ruki show some emotion. I hope you have more moments like this in more of your chapters.

I also like that he finally tried talking to Uruha for once. Granted, it didn't get very far but it's a first step and that works.

Keep up the good work and keep writing

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nadiaz89 May 20 2010, 00:10:07 UTC
;3 Waaai, I just woke up after leaving my pc on and your comment really just put a smile on my face. It boosted my energy for writing! THanks so much! I could chase u down and give u a bear hug \(>.<)/

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angeldemon1 May 20 2010, 19:51:33 UTC
I would welcome that, I love hugs :D
I'm glad it boosted your energy for writing though and I hope to see more soon.

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nashi_moto May 23 2010, 15:28:16 UTC
Hahah I love the way Uruha is mocking Ruki! xD

Aaaw... Ruki made me cry at the end! ;__;

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nadiaz89 May 23 2010, 15:33:26 UTC
Haha, I'm glad you like the way those two interacted. ^^ Hopefully you'll like the next chapter just as well. I'm working on it right now. Hopefully I'll be satisfied with it soon; then I can post.

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konicoffee May 29 2010, 12:16:17 UTC
I finally found the time to read this fic! I'm liking the character development on Ruki so far. I also like how Uruha and Ruki's relationship is slowly building. :)

Looking forward to the update!

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nadiaz89 May 29 2010, 12:31:54 UTC
Hai hai, thank u so much! ^-^ I was quite worried that people would get bored with the slow development... But well, I'll continue to write; hoping to hone my skills as time goes by. Still can't write smut as well as I hoped to; which is prolly why there was only one smut scene so far. >.<

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