I Shall Protect You! (Chapter 9/?)

Jun 18, 2010 10:41


Title: [I Shall Protect You!]

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ruki x uruha

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angeldemon1 June 18 2010, 05:28:27 UTC
That made me laugh, hopefully nobody walks in on Ruki while he takes care of his business. I can only imagine what Uruha's thinking.
On a serious note, I am glad to see Ruki's softer side and I really hope we see more of that side. Don't get me wrong, I love his as a badass too so don't want him turning into a wuss but it's nice to see his more 'human' side.

Great job love and keep up the good work.

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nadiaz89 June 18 2010, 17:46:41 UTC
Hahah... people walking in on Ruki? lol. With Ruki's streak of misfortune; you can bet worse things would happen to him. Thanks...^^ I had so much fun making this chapter; so I'm really glad it made people laugh. XD especially you who's been following this fic closely... *me is rolling around on floor happily*

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tiavanilla June 18 2010, 05:32:06 UTC
omg this is the first chapter I've read and I absolutely love it from start to finish. In this chapter alone you've managed to touch on quite a number of things that I just love. Kai's toned arms, the mere mention of Miyavi has got me =D, Ruki's demented self, you know I've always imagined that it would be Ruki raping someone [the sneaky lil bastard lol]in this case its the one you never really expect, the poor little Uruha in my head I can't even imagine him swatting a fly. I picture him going "Flies are people too". Ruki needs some sort of psychiatric evaluation, I mean getting a boner thinking about Uruha raping him? Come on! [I actually think that's freaking awesome] especially when Uruha hears Ruki's moans, if he only knew. Ruki's just a psycho stuck between a rock and a hard place [I don't want to do this but dammit I want the money, blast that mother of mine, a pain in the ass even when she's dead. As for Kai, I think he was in the wrong place at the wrong time and shit happened, and the fact that he stole Ruki's girlfriend, ( ... )

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nadiaz89 June 18 2010, 17:26:02 UTC
wow.... O.O that's teh longest comment I've been given. Hahaha... ^^ Thank u so much! That's an interesting evaluation of Ruki's char u got there, ^^ as for Kai... well, let's just say he wanted to be the baddie but his actual personality often lands him into hot water.

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alisa_99 June 18 2010, 08:09:58 UTC
Oh, it was greate! thank you for some action, so sexy action:) Little dirty kitty dreams to be raped again by Uru:) I knew it! So Uru must help him ^__^

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nadiaz89 June 18 2010, 17:18:51 UTC
X3 haha, stay tuned for next chappie. Oh... Ruki is going to get into so much trouble; Reita has it for him, Uruha definitely has the secret desire to keep Ruki for himself, as for Kai and Miyavi... haha.. Just find out when I post next time~ ^^

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nashi_moto June 18 2010, 14:09:37 UTC
Miyavi.. you're not good to hide secrets! xD

AND AT THE END!! ... Haha, man that made my day! xD...
Can't wait for the next chapter! (I bet it's gonna be fun! ;D)

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nadiaz89 June 18 2010, 17:15:34 UTC
Hahaha~ Oh... I'm just getting started! ^^

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manabou June 18 2010, 15:32:48 UTC
Aahahha what's Uruha going to say to Ruki later? ;) haha
Awh, Ruki gets a hard on thinking of Uru, things are moving forward ne? ^^ thank you

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nadiaz89 June 18 2010, 15:59:00 UTC
XD I'm so Glad you like this chapter! ^^ yays!

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