[naruto] Ki response v.2.0

[naifun]

Ki asked for two, so I deliver! Albeit badly. I apologise, I've been feeling very down and out of it. Mm. -sigh-

Kurenai; midnight for shadows_of_fire

Comments

[shadows_of_fire]

Wow. *stares* That was absolutely beautiful. And it fits so well with my own conception of Kurenai (a rather darker idea than most have, I imagine...) but it's so lovely and stark and terrible. Thank you so much. *loves*

It's so hard to pick out any lines I loved in particular; I'd end up quoting the whole drabble. Perhaps most especially the description of "what was once a person" becoming "incoherence and despair planted in a shell of flesh" and your insight into how she learned to exploit the mind and refused to blend in quietly, and yet couldn't control her own mind when it came down to it. *hugs Kurenai*

Thank you!

[naifun]

-wibbles- Stop it! You're all making me grin idiotically. And I didn't think it was that good.

I'm so happy that you liked it. It nagged me, truly, but I suppose I can do character insight. Alas, I can't do plot, but I can do character insight. XP *hugs* Anytime! I love your requests, nya.

[shyunpo]

.. I am in awe.. I really am. Damn. You write so well. I'm amazed. *_*

[naifun]

Eee! ._.;; I have room for improvement still but thank you! ♥

[sahara_storm]

Beautifully written. That was -really- good.

Ooo

[anime_melly]

Sugoi! You are so talented! I want to read more!