[avatar] mutable

Jul 06, 2007 11:52

First Avatar one-shot!

Zuko-centric. Introspection as always. Zutara hints-- turn away if it ain't your cuppa tea.

Change is... )

avatar, katara, zutara, fanfiction, zuko

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naifun July 6 2007, 16:52:53 UTC
THAT'S WHAT I'M SUPPOSED TO SAY TO YOU.

;; ♥

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loveroftheflame July 6 2007, 16:34:34 UTC
Oooh my how lovely! Welcome and please, don't be a stranger!

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naifun July 6 2007, 23:14:55 UTC
Inspiration permitting!

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manonlechat July 6 2007, 17:11:43 UTC
And then he finds himself with a lapful of happy waterbender and wonders just how much patience he'll really have if she keeps teasing him like that.

Loved that little bit! And Zuko's taste for chrysanthemum tea. XD

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naifun July 6 2007, 19:39:16 UTC
"...Zuko? What, perchance, is that flowery aroma coming from your chambers?"

"NOTHING, UNCLE."

♥ tea.

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manonlechat July 6 2007, 20:23:51 UTC
Love your icons, by the way!

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naifun July 6 2007, 23:07:10 UTC
-beam- Thank you! I'm on a themed teacup roll. Need two more to complete my insanity.

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leiral July 6 2007, 17:37:04 UTC
Wonderfully done and great job! Welcome to the comm!

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naifun July 6 2007, 23:15:11 UTC
Thank you!

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oyster_district July 6 2007, 17:38:06 UTC
This only proves my Fire Lord Zuko = Duke Leto Atreides theory. Just thought I'd share that. And your fic is wonderful! I echo the above statements: please keep writing this 'ship. I love the tone, the rhythm, and the attention to detail. Thank you.

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naifun July 6 2007, 19:40:27 UTC
Thank you very much! Enlighten me, as I know sorely little about Dune?

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oyster_district July 7 2007, 05:28:07 UTC
There aren't a whole lot of direct parallels between Zuko and Leto. But their characters are very similar, in that Leto is capable of doing very tough things when he feels like he or his family is at risk, and I think Zuko is the same. Both men (if we count your characterization of an aged Zuko here) are bored by politics but forced to suffer through it, and they both appreciate peace and the opportunity to be at home with their wives/companions.

Now if Zuko would just sleep with Katara and have two ultra-prescient children... :P

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