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naika7

RPF: Damaged at Last

Nov 19, 2008 15:00

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hugh laurie, hugh/jen, jennifer morrison, rpf

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mabe85 November 20 2008, 07:09:34 UTC

The end part is beautiful, especially the imagery of Hugh and Jen sitting on the bench in the morning, sipping coffee and reading.
Nice work :)

naika7 November 21 2008, 22:13:21 UTC

Yes, I wanted to give them some light after a dark beginning.

Thanks for reading, Bere!

autumnfairytale November 20 2008, 10:11:10 UTC

I didn't notice this was up until just now.

I loved it! I am not a fan of angst, unless it is written very well, and this was extremely well written. :) I too became a little angry with Hugh during parts of this fic and when an author is able to move you to feel emotion like that, it's a sure sign of a great fic.

I hope that we have many more of your RPF's (and House/Cameron) fic to look forward to in the future. :)

~Teresa

naika7 November 21 2008, 22:15:08 UTC

Well thank you !!! For reading it over for me also :) It's very interesting you guys felt angry just like Jen, I am amazed. I guess when you write it you realize how very fictional it is and it helps to have outsider's perspective.

I signed up for Secret Santa so I am writing an upbeat fic now :)

entity22 November 20 2008, 16:19:49 UTC

I was hoping there would be some sort of sequel to the first fic so I was pretty darn pleased to see this LOL

Very beautiful,"real",emotional and hot,I loved it and the last part was amazing .

naika7 November 21 2008, 22:16:24 UTC

Thank you for reading!

I wanted to give them some light in the end there. I truly feel though that in the context of the story there really isn't a happy ending lolz :)

madpsychogirl December 4 2008, 17:31:22 UTC

*sighs* You're so amazing at this :D

naika7 December 4 2008, 17:34:41 UTC

Thank you, thank you so much for reading!

madpsychogirl December 4 2008, 17:37:02 UTC

Always :) I'm just catching up on comments I've missed throughout my flist. Was just in the middle of commenting to another entry of yours :D

How are you my love? *hugs*

naika7 December 4 2008, 17:46:26 UTC

I am alright. Very Very busy, I have finals next week, but I still find time to come on here.

Masters is much harder than I thought it would be :)

How about you, precious? Your icon makes me think you are in a good mood :)

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naika7 January 14 2009, 06:50:00 UTC

I am so glad you read the second part and enjoyed. Feedback it always very nice! Thank you!