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naimu

Special, Cause It's Our Own: i will possess your heart

Oct 17, 2009 06:12

TITLE: Special, Cause It's Our Own
CHAPTER: one: I WILL POSSESS YOUR HEART
PAIRING: Bones/Kirk
RATING: R
WORD COUNT: 6,297
SUMMARY: two lonely people meet, in one life time or the other- set in suburban shores of Cape Cod, two young boys find each other, grow with each other, and then find each other again after losing each other.
WARNING: first ( Read more... )

fic, bones/kirk, special verse, star trek

Comments 41

nictusa October 17 2009, 14:25:29 UTC

Aw, this was adorable. I kind of love 'Bones and Jim as kids' stories. They make me happy.

Not gonna lie, though, I when I first read this:
"When Jim first meets Leonard he sees a beacon."
I totally read 'Bacon' instead of 'beacon' and was like: WUT? OH, BEAcon. LOL, I'm dumb.

naimu October 17 2009, 14:57:29 UTC

OOH! dyslexic moment! (i totally have that with hearing)
XD we all have one of those all the time!
no worries
and no no~ you're not dumb!

thank you for reading!

tillyenna October 17 2009, 14:34:52 UTC

omg epically beautiful :D love it lots

naimu October 17 2009, 14:56:12 UTC

hands EPIC thank you!
>___< thank you for reading!

v_chan_paradise October 17 2009, 15:13:46 UTC

Loved it, sweet and bitter at the same time.
would love more... please?

naimu October 17 2009, 15:23:18 UTC

second one is being written
THANK YOU for reading and enjoying it!
^___________^

ps. its only ganna get worse though~ :C

scotchsour October 17 2009, 16:03:06 UTC

Looking for a part 2... Where the rest? It was lovely.

naimu October 17 2009, 16:20:12 UTC

the rest are not yet written ! >_____< ! hahaha
there are up to 13 parts! but im workin on it! i promise!

thank you so much for reading!

bonesyandjimmy October 17 2009, 18:46:47 UTC

DEATH CAB COR CUTIE YESSSSS.

I can totally see where this is going, and I love it to fucking death. HOWEVER, a word to the wise, maybe consider getting a beta? I'm not trying to be rude or anything, cause I love this story so far, just that there are quite a few grammatical and spelling errors. A second eye would do wonders. :>

Can't wait till the next part.

bonesyandjimmy October 17 2009, 18:48:54 UTC

And by cor I mean FOR.

HURR DURR.

naimu October 19 2009, 02:49:32 UTC

ah! sorry! same person! hahah snowinginjune is my rl journal! i didnt sign off it! sorry for the confusion!

snowinginjune October 18 2009, 00:32:51 UTC

death cab for cutie!!!!!!!
thank you for reading!
and i did have several beta attempts... they never get back to me :/
and sometimes they change certain sentence i've wrote grammatically wrong, for like emphasizes so it didnt work out

BUT SPELLING IS A NO NO! D:
i shall have to re-re-recheck my work for next time!

but yesh!!! thank you so much for reading!