Special, Cause It's Our Own: i will possess your heart

[naimu]

TITLE: Special, Cause It's Our Own
CHAPTER: one: I WILL POSSESS YOUR HEART
PAIRING: Bones/Kirk
RATING: R
WORD COUNT: 6,297
SUMMARY: two lonely people meet, in one life time or the other- set in suburban shores of Cape Cod, two young boys find each other, grow with each other, and then find each other again after losing each other.
WARNING: first

Comments

[shadowclub]

This was so beautiful. I love the style and how you've interwove all this imagery with the ocean into their relationship. The way you broke up the sections was perfect for the flow of the piece. I'm really looking forward to see where this fic is going! I love your Bones and poor Jim seems so broken!

♥

[naimu]

>______< !!! thank you so much for such a great review!!!
i am actually half way done with part two!
and yea they are broken :C i'm horrible! making them all broken~
(but when they cry its the best part!!! OMG! i just quoted the crazy lady on SUPERNATURAL! dont know if u watch supernatural but... yea! ANYWAYS!)

THANK YOU FOR READING!

[iris_imer]

Oh, oh my heart! “I don’t want to miss you…” Oh you crushed me! This is really lovely and sweet, while maintaining the same snarky Bones I love.

Well done!!

[naimu]

thank you so very much!!!
>____< chapter two is finished and currently being overlooked by my beta
and chapter three is half way there!!!

[dristi2u]

hi,

wonderful story! the narration reminded me of shadows playing with darkness with a hint of light...

thumbs up!

[naimu]

ah such a lovely comment!
thank you so very much!

[explicitones]

:O first, particularly love the way you captured Bones' voice/character. i don't remember much of the movie now, but unless I'm remembering wrong, you got it down-pat.

second, lolllll Lenny xD
also, this scene:
“Whatcha doin’ here? You should be in bed”

“I am in bed…”

“Not mine, you smart ass- you should be in your own, not movin’ around- resting”
I can totally see happening haha.

and lastly, oh I very much enjoyed the ending of this chapter, how you hint at the beginnings of a beautiful relationship and the fact that it's not perfect to start but will be someday--beautifullll~

did spot a few grammatical errors, though, just to tell you

[naimu]

there are ALOT of grammatical errors >_____< i need a quick beta
but no one get back to me as quickly as i'd liek them too, but i understand REAL LIFE happens~

thanks for leaving such a wonderful comment!!! KYAH! you always pamper meh!!!
and oh so spot on young grasshopper! thye shall so have a beautiful and perfect ending one day~

YAYAYYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!! HAHAHHAHAHA I AM HAPPY HAPPY!!!

[explicitones]

teeheeeeee! omg because you said you felt special that i accidentally used the wrong journal to comment you, i will use it always nowwww :DDD

off to ch.2~~

[naimu]

now i know i am special in the best way possible!!!

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[naimu]

thank you~
do i need to do anything back?