Nairaith:The Long Journey:Part 2

[nairaithironaxe]

The dreams came again, much the same as they had been since that night. Blood awash, elves looking at him, their mouth's agape in silent horror. He tried to stop his hands from working. Desperately fought against his own head, tried to hoold back his hands from delivering the coup de grace' to the elven people

Comments

[mystranger]

you are so much better at placing your characters and giving them emotions and the like. compared to you, mine seem to be slightly flat. and i'm not just being nice. you're a wonderful storyteller in any form.

--Wanderer

I like it

[anonymous]

The stories are very good, I like the discription and the setting. I look forward to reading more, you do a wondeful job of making your characters come alive and seem like real people, rather then just some character in a book or something.
--Steve