LJ Idol 27 - Home Game - Noumenon

[naiveprophet]

comedychick encouraged me to check out LJ Idol. I had seen people posting things for it, but had no idea what it was about. I was intrigued when she explained it to me, and checked it out. I liked the idea of the home game. (I am often too.. insecure to compete.) I had an idea for the latest prompt, noumenon, and so I decided to go ahead and write it. I...

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[comedychick]

Oh, I really liked this! You should definitely link it and share it with the community. I'll probably mention the home game again in my LJ later this week, and mention you, if you like. A couple weeks ago there were a fair few home game entries that I encouraged more people to read, with some success.

My skin prickles as though her gaze actually touches me, like thousands of centipedes tracing over my flesh and learning all the scars, the imperfections.

I really liked the imagery in this line. It kind of had the same effect on me!

[naiveprophet]

;DDD thank you! I'll link it haha

[comedychick]

Woohoo!

[treeson]

I've never read an LJ Idol entry (or maybe kinda entry to be decided upon later) before, so I'm damn intrigued after reading this to get my hands on some other ones. I came into this no expectations and left seriously wanting to read whole novels of whatever you write.

I vote for sharing. It's brilliant.

<3 treeson

[comedychick]

*checks your flist* Looks like only kutiechick on your flist has been a competitor before. We're down to the final 14 (from 261 competitors total this season) now so I'd definitely encourage you to check our the final few rounds of the game. You can find the community at therealljidol. Yes I'm totally trying to encourage more people over to the community at the moment! I also just made this post that hopefully sums up the community in case you're interested in learning more. :)

[naiveprophet]

oh my gosh, thank you! you just made my day.

[pixiebelle]

What comedychick said! The poll just went up over at therealljidol and you can read all the entries over there!

We'd love to have you check our stuff out :D

[pixiebelle]

I have to say that you're very good. I loved this and your writing is fantastic. I'd love to see more from you!

[naiveprophet]

Thank you! :D I'm sure I'll continue writing for the home games.

[alephz]

Reading this, I really hope to see you next time 'round in Idol.

[naiveprophet]

Eeee, thank you. I'm not sure if I'll compete, but I like the community and I'll probably continue to stalk it.

[joeymichaels]

Welcome to LJI! Great first home game entry! :D

[naiveprophet]

Thank you!