Be Mine Chapter 5

Sep 07, 2009 17:31


Title: Be Mine

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be mine, chapter 5

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aida_pi September 8 2009, 11:02:16 UTC
lying in Chinen’s lap and being fed by Chinen
kyaaa!!!! THIS SO SEUPERBLY ROMANTIC!!
lol
baka me...
n when chinen asked yuto wether he want to fed again today... i was like...... *blink2*
kyaaa
loooveee this!!
u update fast ne... ^^

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nakachii September 8 2009, 15:57:17 UTC
haha! aww so glad you thought so, I was aiming for romantic haha
Thanks so much! *hugs*

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aida_pi September 8 2009, 17:44:29 UTC
lol
aiming for romantic ne?
oh yeah,how long is this fics gonna be?
im afraid it'll finish sooner...
cz it seems like that..?

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nakachii September 8 2009, 18:01:42 UTC
lol originally it was going to be a really short fic with 5 chapters only because I didn't think anyone would read it haha and I was merely writing for fun

I was surprised to see that I did get readers and I'm quite motivated to add back content that I was going to otherwise discard in order to cut the story short. So therefore, I'd say there are still quite a number of chapters to go but when it's nearing an end I'll give a warning in my author's notes for everyone. It'll be sad to let this story go though. >_< .

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hikayuto September 8 2009, 12:10:59 UTC
Umm, this update's more interesting than previous chaps, I think.
I'm glad that Yuto and Chii now are so sweet to each other ne. Chii feeds Yuto >///< and Yuto carries Chii on his back. Yay~

Btw
“I know you guys aren’t, I’m just saying people are going to get the wrong idea, Chinen’s already known as the school’s slu-”
What does Ryo mean? ~_~"

Waiting for next chap ne Nat-chan ^^

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nakachii September 8 2009, 16:04:20 UTC
I'm glad it's getting more interesting ^_^
I know they are so adorable together <3

Oh and to answer your question, much more will be explained about that in a later chapter haha

And next chapter comes out today! ^^

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eroxhime September 8 2009, 12:54:32 UTC
UAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

BAKA CHINEN~ >.<

DO NOT MAKE ME HATE 'OKAJIMA'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

In sum1's ff about yutochii, theres also okajima n chii always the one WHO SUFFERED 6__6

X((( HUH

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nakachii September 8 2009, 16:10:55 UTC
haha oh my! I'll try not to make you hate okajima, I like all pairings actually but my bias is towards NakaChii or YutoChii <3

Don't worry, he got a piggy back ride home on Yuto's back and it seems Yuto is trying to understand why Chii is suffering too ^_^

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chibilover14 September 8 2009, 22:20:47 UTC
Aww... poor Yuto and his parents getting divorced. ;w;

LKASFJ A;SJDFKLAS THEIR RELATIONSHIP ISH TOO ADORABLLLE! CHINEN FEEDING YUTO! XDD AND THE LAP! XDD And how Yuto resists at first but finally complies to Chinen, taking the offers. xD

Chinen ish still hiding his feelings huh? ;w; And doesn't want Yuto to misunderstand. If only he comes to understand Chinen soon!

ASKLDF A;SKLJDFAW YUTO CARRYING CHINEN ISH TOO CUUUTE~!! <3333333 *FLAILS* ANd Chinen's possessiveness ish definitely too cute. I know I'm overusing that but it's true.

And Yuto wants to understand Chii.. Chii.. let Yuto understand you! ;w; LOL

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nakachii September 9 2009, 19:04:23 UTC
LOL haha These were exactly my thoughts when writing it out haha thanks so much for commenting <3

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arashiku September 9 2009, 01:14:03 UTC
This as great! Sorry kinda in a rush so cant talk much! Gonna go read next chap!
~Michi (Not Emi)

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nakachii September 9 2009, 19:01:35 UTC
thanks for always leaving a comment! ^_^

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arashiku September 10 2009, 02:03:10 UTC
No problem! I'll comment even if my hand or leg is sore from volleyball practice! XD Last time I commented with swollen arm but now I reply with a hurting leg :P anyways I really do enjoy this ^^
~Michi (Not Emi)
PS Sorry for rambling on and on XD Hope you dont mind ><

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