[Pin] everything (it's you); part II

Jan 24, 2009 23:04

She’d sucked on his bottom lip, so gentle and sweet, Jin didn’t want her to ever stop. But then she’d fallen slack against him, head on his shoulder with her hand still loosely embracing him.

“Pi?” he whispered cautiously, confused. She didn’t move, and he realized that she’d fallen asleep. Carrying her to the couch was nothing, but when he ( Read more... )

jin/yamapi, oh hey thar ryo,

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pixisticks January 25 2009, 08:09:08 UTC
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T_T I am such a sucker for sappy romantic fic. And it's PIN and Pi is a GIRL and it's SWEET and ADORABLE and alksfhalskfhaslkfsahf my heart, it is melting into a little gooey blob on the floor. alskhaflahflashflha

♥ ♥ ♥ *clings to this fic*

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nakamaruyo January 26 2009, 01:22:37 UTC
♥ I just hope it wasn't too sappy! Thank you so much; I'm very glad you enjoyed it! ♥ ♥ ♥

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polyurethane January 25 2009, 08:15:56 UTC
I really liked the flow of this.

It was a nice piece to read and just... it made me happy to read it?

It's always nice to see people explore a different side of Pin. I loved this tonnes.

I'll have nice dreams tonight because of this, thanks. ♥

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nakamaruyo January 26 2009, 01:27:35 UTC
I'm glad you liked the flow of the piece; most everything came really naturally (:

I also like writing Pin AUs because I feel like they could be together in any situation.

Pin is really great for being reason for good dreams, ne ♥

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polyurethane January 26 2009, 01:36:47 UTC
Isn't it just so nice when fics flow so well that they practically write themselves? :D

Yes, yes they could be. Be they both boys, both girls, one a girl the other a boy, whatever it just works.

A very great reason. ♥

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snow_meow January 25 2009, 09:45:07 UTC
I love this fic.

I love the way the story unfolds through time.
It is interesting how their love develops through their relationship and friendship with other people.

It is interesting how you fit bits and pieces of each person's character, personality and behaviour from reality into this fic.

We had Akame, TomaPi and KoyaPi. All the usual OTPs in this fic. It was really good how you blend it all in.

Thank you for this fic.

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nakamaruyo January 26 2009, 01:37:22 UTC
Thank you! I really wanted this alternate universe to be very close to reality, showing that just because Yamapi is a girl doesn't mean she'd be a totally different person. She's still Yamapi and still has a lot of the same friends, and I really enjoyed working random bits and references all over this :D It was long, but really a lot of fun to write; so I'm very glad you read it and enjoyed it. Thank you again!

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jt_fangirlism January 26 2009, 00:12:09 UTC
PIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNN!!♥with ninja Ryo

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i love this fic!^^

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nakamaruyo January 26 2009, 01:38:51 UTC
To be honest, I really love Ryo in this xD He's so great. Pin is not complete without him sometimes xD

Thank you for reading; I'm glad you love it!

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gothicauthor January 26 2009, 00:14:23 UTC
alkn Usually, I really don't like girl!Je fics or even Pin, but I kind of loved this. XD Everyone's so cute and well-characterized, and I particularly liked how they all interacted. Kind of wish we'd gotten to see more of KAT-TUN but alksnlkng so cute.

GA

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nakamaruyo January 26 2009, 01:41:57 UTC
I'm surprised you even read it in the first place, if that's the case! Surprised, but grateful and also pleased :D I'm glad you enjoyed it; I really liked writing the characters and making them stay true to themselves (as I see them, anyway). I'm not much of a KAT-TUN fan, so I'm sorry there's so little (okay, none) of them, but I really appreciate you totally breaking out of the box to read this! Thank you!

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gothicauthor January 26 2009, 06:09:57 UTC
You had a really good summary! I was intrigued~ XD I think you did a really good job! I really liked how you took their age differences into consideration. Somehow, that made it more realistic for me...

Ahh, yeah, I totally understand... x.x I don't like writing about the boys I don't know, either, unless it's in a cameo capacity or something. It's not as fun without the in-jokes, right? (alksnlkn BY THE WAY, so happy you used the gravity line. XD)

:DD Thank you for writing this!

GA

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nakamaruyo January 26 2009, 06:29:37 UTC
lololol no way; my stupid summary xD I really couldn't think of what to write without it sounding totally lame. Ah, I did want to make it as true to reality as I could...to an extent, anyway. Thinking about it, I think Toma should be older than Pi but w/e w/e~

Probably ne. Although, I started writing this Koki/Jin/Yamapi PWP a couple weeks ago, haha. It's not going to get finished, I think. And once upon a time I wanted to write fic about how Nakamaru is glad he's so normal because it lets him have a normal relationship with his girlfriend. haha, it sounds so random. (I wanted to write that so badly; it's so Yamapi xD I glad you liked it!)

No, thank you again for reading!

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