Emergency Unlucky Holiday Day, Jon/Stephen

Feb 17, 2009 17:11



Fic: Emergency Unlucky Holiday Day

Author: Nakanna Lee

Pairing: Jon / Stephen

Rating: PG-13 for language

Word Count: 2,100

Summary: Forget it, Jon thinks, it’s bad but it cannot have been that bad. They’re friends. It’s forgivable because of that. Or maybe not, because of that.
A/N:  Meant for this to be posted on Friday the 13th, but it wasn't ready to ( Read more... )

tcr, jon/stephen, fic, tds

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ilcocoabean February 18 2009, 01:58:30 UTC
*wibbles* I just... wow. Seriously just wow. I can't even formulate the words for just how beautiful this was.

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nakannalee February 18 2009, 03:02:37 UTC
Aww! So glad you enjoyed it. :) Thanks for reading and dropping a comment, it's very appreciated!

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mcollinknight February 18 2009, 02:47:02 UTC
AGH AGH AGH AGH THIS IS BRILLIANT.

PHWOAR. I love it. But I second (third? eleventh?) the request for more because you cut out before the money shot there needs to be more. This was very beautifully written, and I love the tension and awkwardness and loveliness. Brava.

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nakannalee February 18 2009, 03:04:29 UTC
Thank you thank you! :) Like I said, hopefully there will be more to this... But probably not before the weekend. Spring break is coming up, though, so writing time is definitely in sight. Great to know that there is interest in more--I'm definitely considering adding on to the fic.

Thanks again!

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mcollinknight February 18 2009, 03:15:22 UTC
Know how it is, I'm on spring break now and writing up a storm. Good luck! ("IS THERE INTEREST," SHE SAYS. "PFAH!" SAYS I. "IS THERE INTEREST, INDEED.")

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indiwise February 18 2009, 05:39:16 UTC
Wow - this was fantastic. Painful as hell, but fantastic. And this:

The smile was slowly pulling down into a straight line across his face. A small swath of wrinkles appeared in the middle of his forehead, but there wasn’t concern or confusion in his brows, only more warmth, and something dark, something that Jon had never seen Stephen direct towards him.

- freaking blew me away - I could see that perfectly. Dang.

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nakannalee February 18 2009, 19:08:01 UTC
Thank you, so glad you liked it! And thanks especially for specifics. :) It's really appreciated!

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muffin_love77 February 18 2009, 08:01:31 UTC
Ridiculously amazing. Your writing is seriously just breaktaking.I love how this story where, essentially, nothing happens, was so enthralling. I echo the sentiments above for a sequel (of course, if busy schedules permit--we've all been there). Either way, this is so beautiful; thank you.

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nakannalee February 18 2009, 19:10:25 UTC
Aww, thank you so much for the kind comment! A sequel will hopefully be on the way. (And yes, schedules--crazy, aren't they? Gah!)

Thanks again for reading and commenting, as always!

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klaudyna February 18 2009, 09:55:21 UTC
That was so beautiful and sad and subtle. Amazing.

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nakannalee February 18 2009, 19:14:06 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting! So happy you liked it. :)

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