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inesdelsol May 11 2010, 06:40:08 UTC
I need to read it again and again. It's really... really difficult. Thank you for those lines and for making my morning. You're gonna make my noon and afternoon as well. Thank you.

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nakannalee May 11 2010, 15:16:23 UTC
Oh, thank you! Very glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate all your comments! :)

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epistolic May 11 2010, 08:50:30 UTC
I loved this. It was truly, truly beautiful and the way that you write - the words that you use, and how you place them - has such a marvelous impact. Well done!

Just one tiny thing - this was most certainly not 20 000 words long... though I wish it was :(

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nakannalee May 11 2010, 15:19:19 UTC
Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed.

And thanks also for the word count catch. I accidentally took the number for "characters" instead. Haha, whoops. XD Fixed now.

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stephiel May 11 2010, 21:39:39 UTC
I am in awe.

What a beautifully written fic. As I read, I could "hear" Robert and Jude's voices so clearly.

Hot, passionate, and romantic in a very unique way. Well done! :)

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nakannalee May 12 2010, 18:18:39 UTC
Thank you so much! Glad the dialogue rang true to you. I really appreciate the comment!

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nakannalee May 13 2010, 15:08:39 UTC
Thanks, that's what I was hoping for. :)

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auctorial May 13 2010, 16:07:58 UTC
This was so beautiful. I love the way you describe things, and the way you built up tension, and the way you broke my heart in the middle, and especially the way you fixed it in the end. <333

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nakannalee May 13 2010, 16:49:50 UTC
Oh, thank you so much! Glad it was able to bring you through all those emotions. :) I very much appreciate the feedback!

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