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Fic: Today's Special

Jan 13, 2011 12:40

Fic: Today’s Special
Author: Nakanna Lee
Pairing: More gen, but Jimmy/Dean if you squint
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Jimmy Novak takes his young family to a diner every Sunday, and one time Sam and Dean happen to be there, too.

( The taller one surveyed the diner quietly as the hostess seated them. The other winked at her, then flipped his menu open to the dessert list. )

fic, supernatural

Comments 7

cousinmary January 13 2011, 20:31:16 UTC

Huh, I really liked this. It was odd, but very interesting. Good work :)

nakannalee January 13 2011, 22:13:37 UTC

Thanks, glad you liked it!

danov January 13 2011, 21:32:33 UTC

This really pulled me in. Your use of description is fantastic, especially with what Jimmy is seeing and hearing.

I love Jimmy's faith.
Favorite line: “You were not sent here for me,” said Jimmy. “You were sent here for you.”

ps- small and amusing typo- The old woman thanked him and his daughter splashed applesauce out of the BOWEL

nakannalee January 13 2011, 22:14:49 UTC

Aw, thanks! Very glad you enjoyed the details... and nice eye with that typo. Oh, little children and your uncontrollable biological functions. ;)

gupeperu April 9 2011, 15:30:42 UTC

Great, I never knew this, thanks.

qosukirk April 14 2011, 17:07:15 UTC

Great work keep it coming, best blog on earth

darionlefi November 1 2011, 16:24:04 UTC

This article was vey helpful to me. It helped me to be informed and more aware. The details were such a blessing, thanks.