Ficlet: Quarter for the Meter (H/W)

[nakeno]

Title: Quarter in the Meter
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Houson
Summary: Which is how it all started, really: unseen GM blades and the un-recognized smell of 'what in the fuck was I thinking?'
Disclaimer: Not at all mine; but definitely kid tested and mother approved!
Beta: ...Er.

Comments

[phinnia]

They are both, underneath, fifteen year old boys, really. <3 <3
I love kicks off like a practiced backstroke swimmer. Wilson can practically hear the unspoken 'whee!', the plastic BM/cardboard fan, all the enthusiasm of a sun-warmed, starving baby bird. Mouth open, wings all a-twitter and House answers with a smirk, kicking up his feet as he digs in with his cane and rolls behind the counter, leaving nothing but an exaggerated, adolescent "ra-aa-d!" in his wake. (oh god, so HOUSE in a nutshell ...)

[nakeno]

It's the Dolphin of Graciousness! =) It always tickles me to see it, and you.

House wears his inner child on the outside, doesn't he? I love to get into the porny aspect of House and Wilson, but sometimes it's fun just to focus on their interaction and friendship. And how, in a weird way, aside from driving him crazy, House keeps Wilson young. =)

Also, I wanted to inspire images of a naked, flushed Wilson standing at the edge of a bed with three other people in it; nervous and stuttery. Being lead and taught and hesitant about Greg starting to touch him before he finally melts into it. Mmmm... ah, yes. Breaking the boy in. ^_~

Thanks for reading, love. <3<3

[anonymous]

I've meandered over from the sandbox of love to find something not nearly as smutty, but quite wonderful. You really have House captured in these passages - my favorites have been quoted above. I can just picture it. And I love the framing metaphor. Great stuff.

[nakeno]

You know, it's flattering times tres when someone bothers to read something you've done in a fandom that doesn't have the word 'cock' in it once. Seriously. =)

Thank you so much for taking the time to read this, love, and comment.

I always fret over my House voice, so you've no idea how much your saying that puts me at ease.

<3<3

[theboysgonehome]

Your House is v. much love.

[nakeno]

Oh, hay yew! *snuggle* You might have mentioned it before somewhere or other, but I didn't realize you were in the House fandom.

Awesomeness. =D

M'glad you like it. ^_~

I've written other stuff aside from this that's longer; but most of my works are in H/W collabs with recrudescence who has also written a lot of excellent House solo fics herself if you're interested. =)

Thanks for commenting, love. <3

Oh, by the by, have you written any House fics yourself? =D

[theboysgonehome]

I'm really very peripheral in the fandom. I only read it when it stumbles upon me, or it's been recommended. It's also one of the reasons I've never written it -- I've never read bad House fic, and I would hate for mine to be the first.