another piece of my writing

[nameless_jo]

I dunno what is about me, but whenever i write somethin...it always ends up sad lol but anyways...this is my newest and its kinda rushed so i'll prolly end up re-writing it. By the way...the name chise is pronounced (she's a) for all you americans who can't pronounce japenese names lol and these names i used from actual anime for all u anime freaks

Comments

[africangoddesss]

hey buddy, i miss you too...hey, do u still talk to the other jordan?!? remember his answering maching

LMAO

that was so funny...i remember the first time i heard it...I successfully left a 5 minute incomprehensible message on his answering maching..due to all the laughin i was doin.

well its bath time and all that other good stuff

talk to me later?

!*! Carrie !*!

[nameless_jo]

by the way...i still see that crazy boy like everyday at school lol and his answering machine is still the same

[elfudgebear2005]

alrightz truth be told i like the story alrightz it s not that i don t like it it s that i was thinking a little bit too deep and getting into it more than the basic which as a result kinda drew me to not cry over it.....but it is a real good piece of writing.....love it wellz i gotz to go catch yaz laterz....

[nameless_jo]

um...ur opinion don't count cuz u don't like it anyway! lol j/k one of these days i'll get around to writing something positive...and my spelling will be better lol

[africangoddesss]

yes i read the story. youve got some talent J-man.

though the write in ME noticed that you spelled to words wrong.

other than that, fantabulous!

[nameless_jo]

hey hey its not like i took my time...besides since i'm my toughest critic i think it sucks anyway and i'll prolly re-write it. So for all you proper english ppl i'll spell check next time lol

[africangoddesss]

yes plz do!

j/k

CArRie

u know what!!!!

[elfudgebear2005]

u wanna fight don t cha? if u knew how to spell ppl wouldn t say anything to you.lol. it s not our fault u can t spell.lol.......j/k but anywayz.....i m gonna go now before i get myself into trouble.....lol. laterz