Inception: Ariadne/Arthur/Fischer [All That We Keep, part IV]

[namistai8]

Title: All That We Keep, part IV
Author: namistai8
Rating: PG-13 for language
Pairing: Ariadne/Fischer, Ariadne/Arthur
Word Count: 2,826
Disclaimer/Notes/Whatever: Nolan owns, I just borrow. Ariadne dates Fischer, more or less...

All That We Keep, Part I | All That We Keep, Part II | All That We Keep, Part III

Comments

[venus_ice]

Oh I'm a bit late on this but I love the tension between A/A. The slow build up between A/R is fascinating as well. Excited for the next chapter!

Ariadne, you go have Arthur. I'll take Robert off your hands. HNNNGGG.

[namistai8]

Thanks! I'm trying to make the tension between A/A more apparent in the next chapter, as a few things come to a head then.

*laughs* I'm glad you like my depiction of Fischer. Poor, little lonely boy that he is.

[starvinbohemian]

I finally sat down and read all the way through, and I am so impressed. This fic is amazing, the characterizations fantastic, and I simply cannot wait for another update. :)

[namistai8]

Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it!

some guys have all the luck

[cutelilmochi]

If Arthur needed her enough, there wouldn't be this hesitation. I wish it made him more competitive instead of creating this self-doubt. It would be cleaner for the team if he just removed her contact from Fischer. (Just a reaction.)

Re: some guys have all the luck

[namistai8]

I think denial is a very powerful force.

I also don't think that Ariadne is being very honest to herself and to others. I don't think Arthur is being very honest to himself and to Ariadne.

I think in general there's a good lack of honesty about emotions going on.

[whydowefall27]

This is one of the most beautiful stories I've read about Inception, is just so perfect that I cry tears of joy