Original: Familiar Waters

[nananaginip]

When I look back at my total entries here and the time I've had this account I see that there hasn't been much at all. That's how writing is for me, a hobby I keep on the side. But it's a fun hobby, don't get me wrong. I love it especially when an image so strong that it's like a vision gets a hold of me and the only way to purge myself of it is to

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[anonymous]

Tsk tsk. Go to sleep! Ang cringe all you want in the morning :p
-Mike

[nananaginip]

*cringes*

[swollenfoot]

LOL, Allisama, it's not that bad. It was nicely written and the emotions are palpable. There were some gorgeous descriptions.

Of course, it is mush. LOL But it's not that bad a mush. =P Besides, it's romance. It can't be helped. (mush mush mush. LOL J/k)

Then again, I read this at 1 in the morning. He he he

"I ask you not to care about me... For my sake." Gah. Don't care about him for your sake, too. >___< Manipulative jerk (LOL. napaka militante ko talaga.)

I'm sorry. It just reminds me of SasukeSakura, but that's because I'm obsessed. ^^;;

I love the ending. Especially the last line. T-T

Oh, and I couldn't help but feel that there's something otherworldly about the guy, something supernatural, like he's the creature of the sea or something.

I think I know what you mean by "vision." My 3 fave (and most successful, I think) fics sprung from impulse. ^__^

[nananaginip]

*glomps* Thanks for commenting! I have to admit, it really makes a difference if a fellow writer shares her thoughts. You're being nice, but still, I feel like we have this little connection, even if it's just for some of the bits. I feel "understood", <3

Waaah, I bow down to you as my idol in the description department, so I'm glad you like. And mush. MUSH! Mwahaha! For some reason it feels unnatural when I know RL people are reading it, but if it were say Koenma/Botan I'd be right at home. Gimme the understated sap!

Ahaha, actually I didn't hate the guy here but I meant for the girl to hate men because of him. It didn't turn out that way, but at least you hate him for her. ^_~` SasuSaku is really getting to you, huh? Heheh~

Oh, you got the last line! Yay! *glomps Melps* Although the guy isn't really supernatural. But now that I think about how he said "my kind", yeah, you'd think that if you were inclined like I am, ^_~`

Visions = inspiration. They're the best to complete, aren't they?