Beginning of Truths Unseen [orig]

[nananaginip]

Beginnings of an original story that I'd thought of way back in HS before it (naturally) lost fire and died. I'm currently trying to revive it. The setting is Philippine-based and involves extremely tweaked Filipino supernatural things.

This is part of the rewritten attempt:

Comments

[anonymous]

yes, it does pique my interest. What will Kite be doing tonight? I'm thinking along the lines of manananggal hunter. Or am I too crazy for my own good? ^^;; And I like the style, too. I'm a die-hard fan of well-placed fragments. ^.^

~melpomene

[nananaginip]

Waaiii! Thanks for reading, Melpomene! ::glomps:: No, has nothing to do with manananggals. Though now that you mention it, I suppose those are the more popular creatures, huh? I didn't use it because am still rather icked out that by how they eat intestines. Eeew.

No, Kite isn't a hunter, in that sense. Am deciding whether I should heavily hint at what her game is right away or tone it down for later. Hrm.

[anonymous]

he he he... Flying women cut in half wrenching out guts are a bit gruesome, aren't they? XD
oh, feel free to keep up the suspense. =) I really like the mystery actually. write more. ^^
~melps

[nananaginip]

I can't believe I never saw this comment until today! ^^; Tamang-tama, heh. Yes, you will see more although keeping up the suspense might prove to be difficult. But I shall try. *huggles*