Fandom: YYH - Riven (K/B) - Chapter 1, Part 2b
Well, it's about time to do Riven, isn't it? Riven being that YYH Koenma + Botan fanfic I never wrote. I remember conceptualizing it in 2001. It's 2004. Um. Maybe I should start writing it down, yes?
After posting the beginning of the 2nd part of the first chapter, this is the rest of it. Just wrote this draft yesterday afternoon:
( Riven - Chapter One, Part 2b: In the Garden )
After posting the beginning of the 2nd part of the first chapter, this is the rest of it. Just wrote this draft yesterday afternoon:
( Riven - Chapter One, Part 2b: In the Garden )
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I've already commented on the first part before, when you sent me some of the snippets... and yay, you continued it! ^___^ *glomps you*
I liked how Koenma is here. It's different from how he is usually portrayed in most fics, and it's a really welcome change. ^__^ Yes, contrary to the chibi-form he is wearing now...he really has grown up. He's more, well, mature. And...I felt really sad for him. Growing up, and losing your idealism, is a really sad thing.
I thought it was a really sweet scene, when Botan was wiping his cheek with her handkerchief. I can already imagine it in my head now...it's sweet, but not mushy. Although...I can't explain why, but the whole scene was kind of sad, too...
Poor Koenma. ;_; To have to face whatever it was alone, even if he wanted to tell Botan about it...
Overall, I love what you've written so far! ^___^ And I'm still intrigued as to what will happen next...and I still wonder what Enma-sama is up to...>_Oh, btw, about short stories...I recently bought a book in National Bookstore ( ... )
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I'm glad you liked Koenma. He's a bit more serious, isn't it? @_@ He just comes out like that because...
Alli <-- can't do comedy for the life of her ;p
Yes, I feel sad when people get disillusioned. It's like part of you is stolen away and you won't be the same again ever. T_T
Botan wiping Koenma's cheek, glad it didn't come off overly mushy. I love sweetness! ^.^ But sad sweetness? At least the sadness came out. ^-^ Gesture was supposed to remind you of something sad, yup yup.
Anyway, I'm glad you liked! Enma? He's up to no good! mwahahah~
Oooo, I haven't seen that Fil-Am book yet. Thanks so much for the info! I love reading those kind of things for some reason. Ingatz din! And BLOG! hehe~
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