"Just a River" Part 4

[nancybrown]

It Ain't Just a River in Egypt (Part 4)
by XFfan_2000 and NancyBrown
NC-17

Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three

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Chapter Four
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Comments

[quillofminerva]

Oh what will the slimey toad Hath-Set say to Katar? Wish he wouldn't have to stick his nose where it is not wanted.

I liked the conversation between Bashari and Chayara about their possible future, on their farm and their children.

Looking forward to the next update.

Keep up the fanastic work ;o)

I am really enjoying this story.

toodles

Clayre xx

[nancybrown]

Oh, Hath-Set has plenty to say to Katar. :P

[xffan_2000]

Thanks for the kind words.

As for what Hath-Set says to Katar? Probably just wants to know how his trip went and if he brought him back a souvenir. "My King conquered Nebet and all I got was this lousy T-shirt." ;-)

[kimberly_t]

And the countdown to the point of the excrement hitting the fan begins...

Another great chapter! The rooftop scene when she shows him the limits that must be set for their loving, when Shayera remembers how she and Katar used to be, and when they dream of another life together... Wonderful.

And is it just my perception, or is Ishpi patterned after a certain other Leaguer?

[nancybrown]

*grin*

A few of the supporting cast are patterned after other people. Ishpi existed as a concept for about ten minutes before he became an earlier incarnation of a certain red-haired young man. Good eye, btw.

[xffan_2000]

Thanks for your wonderful comments. :o)

[billa1]

I have dropped reviews elsewhere on this wonderful story. But I wanted to let you know that this is extremely well done. You've added so much depth to the characters that this story will certainly influence the way others write about them in the future. Well done! :)

[nancybrown]

We're glad you're liking it. As for the characters, not bad for two people who technically had only five minutes of screen time, hm?

[xffan_2000]

That's always our goal...fanon. :-D