TW Fic: Intersecting Geodesics (1/5)

[nancybrown]

Title: Intersecting Geodesics
Author: nancybrown
Rating: R (language, situations, violence)
Spoilers: up through CoE, brief mentions of events from "Pack Animals," "Almost Perfect" and "Lost Souls"
Characters: Ianto, Jack, John, (Eleven and announced companion)
Warnings: Various shades of dub-con, non-descriptive mentions of sex trafficking, character death

Comments

[elainasaunt]

Brilliant. I love stories with Ianto out of his own time, and especially ones where he meets an other-era Jack. Add your own special brand of cleverness (the Hamelin mention, the 'fetish gear', the characterization of Ianto ... ) and this promises to be a winner. Can I friend you so as to be sure to see the rest of it as soon as it's posted?

[nancybrown]

I may have a slight fixation on the concept of "They're lovers, but only one of them knows/remembers." I'm glad you're enjoying the ride!

(Feel free to Friend. I autofriend at this account. :D )

[laurapetri]

♥
REALLY GOOD START

[nancybrown]

Thanks! :)

[lefaym]

What a great beginning -- I can't wait to read more.

Just one little thing:
They were led into a different room, once that wasn't filled with sick.

Should that be "one" instead of "once"?

[nancybrown]

Got it. Thanks!

[eumelia]

"You're telling me that twenty-first century business formal is the fifty-first century's equivalent to studded black leather pants?"

Brilliant!

This is a very intriguing beginning! Looking forward to more. I love Backstory!Jack fics. "Jaxon", I like that.

[nancybrown]

I love Backstory!Jack fics.

It should worry me that my first reaction to this was to go see if you'd read "Calypso" yet so I could rec it to you if you hadn't. :)

Glad you like the story!

[eumelia]

LOLZ!

That's awesome, I love fandom :D

[wit_worry_what]

Fetish gear!!! Perfect.
Loved the beginning - can't wait for more! Please update soon!!!
w.w.w.

[nancybrown]

:D Glad you like it! More tomorrow ...