TW Fic: One for Sadness, Two for Mirth

[nancybrown]

Title: One for Sadness, Two for Mirth
Author: nancybrown
Rating: NC-17
Characters: Jack/Ianto/Lisa (past Ianto/Lisa/OFC)
Spoilers: up through CoE
Warnings: mention of bodily fluids associated with childbirth
Wordcount: 2300
Summary: PWP. There's a first time for everything. Part of the Rabbit Hole AU, but knowledge of that universe is really not necessary

Comments

[askance]

It's absolutely beautiful, Nancy. I do love them all together but it's the things I didn't expect like the context for why they accept Jack so easily in their history with Victoire. And besides the gorgeous porn having now you give us visions of the past and the future, what has been and will happen together for them.

Thank you. I shall reread tomorrow, slowly to savour it.

[nancybrown]

it's the things I didn't expect like the context for why they accept Jack so easily in their history with Victoire.

Hee! I've had this particular theory for a while in this 'verse, so I am glad it worked for you. :D :D :D

*is delighted you enjoyed your second present*

[observer3]

lovely and erotic..

[nancybrown]

Thank you!

[neifile7]

You have no idea how much I wanted you to write the "first time" in this 'verse. And it is stunning -- hot and tender and deeply moving, for all of them but especially for Jack, who can't quite believe what he's getting and is afraid to hold onto it a minute longer than they allow:

Jack sits up again, reaches for the duvet so they can all find warmth, and his face is far more naked than the rest of him. No. Not a contest, not a war, not squabbling over the man they both love (Jack's face, when he told his impossible story, and she knew then out of all the lies he could be telling, the one of omission was the worst). Jack is not intent on winning a prize. He's offering what he is, and she can read the tightly-held terror that, when dawn breaks, they will thank him for the evening's entertainment and turn him out.It is also touchingly right that this follows a birth (and Lisa's physical sensations are gorgeously mapped), and that it represents a recovery of something treasured and lost that she and Ianto had with Victoire. But of

[nancybrown]

especially for Jack, who can't quite believe what he's getting and is afraid to hold onto it a minute longer than they allow

*grin* Exactly.

I'm glad the other details were effective. Lisa has gone through so many changes, and they're all going through so many more, and yeah.

Thanks for reading! You always leave the most lovely comments. :D

[etmuse]

*adores in silence*

[nancybrown]

*smiles in gratitude*

[vipersweb]

I like this interlude in this verse. I love reading this from Lisa's POV. It's great to see how they fit together, even if one thinks they shouldn't be as comfortable as they are... and even though there is some discomfort you can also see the love that is emerging between all three.

[nancybrown]

Thank you. :)