Dr. Oliver vs. The Heinous Blackmailer - Chapter Three

May 06, 2013 03:38


Title: Dr. Oliver vs. The Heinous Blackmailer

Author: nancygrew

Rating: PG

Disclaimer: Characters belong to ATWT\

Notes: This is outside of my usual "Amnesia" verse. It’s less of an AU [no Sentinel!Luke/Guide!Reid or WereDoberman!Reid/WereKitten!Luke] and more of a remix [Reid doesn’t show up in Oakdale until June 2010 and Luke has made a couple of ( Read more... )

rating: pg, character: bob hughes, character: luke snyder, fan fiction, character: holden snyder, as the world turns, character: reid oliver, character: jack snyder, character: damian grimaldi, pairing: luke/reid

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nancygrew May 7 2013, 07:56:01 UTC
Thank you for the sweet comment!

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moerlin May 6 2013, 21:16:34 UTC
Luke and his two dads, a never-ending saga. I'm glad he's not caving and that it provides some amusement to Reid. ;)

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nancygrew May 7 2013, 07:58:35 UTC
Thanks very much for reading and commenting. I wondered if it was too soon to have Reid be amused by his blackmailer but I figure if Reid was attracted [canonically] to Luke the second or third time he laid eyes on him, then he could be amused by him that early too,

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petuniagirl May 7 2013, 00:21:59 UTC
I see the holier-than-thou cousins are out if full force, lol. Jack wasn't too awful, but, geez, Holden! I'll never understand how no one seemed to care that he walloped Damian with that oar.

Very entertaining, and I like the use of Luke's family to elicit some sympathy/softening from Reid.

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nancygrew May 7 2013, 08:02:29 UTC
Thanks so much! I purposely wrote Jack as less douchey than Holden because I feel that even at his most self-righteous, it's usually more understandable than Holden's deal. Man, I couldn't imagine being married to Carly. Jack will always have a soft spot in my heart for him being so reasonable when Holden was all freaked about Luke being gay.

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kccalgal May 7 2013, 04:29:36 UTC
Oh how I have missed your writing. There is so much fun in this chapter. It is so good to see Luke with some fire in him. Do we know if he and Noah have history yet?

I don't know why but this exchange really got me going.

"So, is Mr. Grimaldi supposed to be climbing out the window?" Reid asked the cop.

"Geez Louise!" cried out the cop as he rushed away from Mr. Snyder into the exam room.

Mr. Snyder raised an eyebrow. "We’re on the sixth floor."

Reid shrugged. "My mistake."

It always pleases me to read stories where the original douche Holden is portrayed in this light. Mr. self righteous was in to heavy emotional blackmail.

Oh and I love the nickname Reid gave Bob.

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nancygrew May 7 2013, 08:04:50 UTC
Thank you very much for the nice feedback!

I haven't addressed any Noah/Luke history yet but I did mention in chapter one that Damian had rescued Luke and Reggie from the Z twins.

If my outline isn't changed, some Noah/Luke history will be addressed next chapter.

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sleeper6 May 11 2013, 02:30:39 UTC
Farmer Ted! Hilarious!

Such witty, sharp dialogue. Really, REALLY enjoying this.

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nancygrew May 12 2013, 02:44:31 UTC
Thank you for reading! I'm glad you're enjoying the fic. The idea of Reid viewing Holden as a big ol' hick just tickles me.

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