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Blood Price, Chapter 7

May 13, 2005 17:23

Blood Price
by Nan Dibble

Chapter 7: Convergences (complete)

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sangpassionne May 13 2005, 14:34:57 UTC

Oh hell!

nandibble May 13 2005, 14:44:40 UTC

Thanks...I think.

sangpassionne May 13 2005, 14:47:15 UTC

Definitely good, or sort of anyway. Poor Mike, he's such a sweetie, in a homicidal vampire kind of a way.

anonymous May 13 2005, 14:58:28 UTC

Now that, the cutting in half! of Mike, that was unexpected.
Very much liked,
“I claim them all!” Dawn declared, with no idea what claiming entailed but grabbing what felt like an opportunity.
Jane

tesla321 May 13 2005, 15:22:27 UTC

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Damn, you're a savage writer.

The Supplice...Dawn's claiming them all...MIKE!!!
And Spike trying. As ever.

Boy, you've done excellently to pack in so much plot, so much action, and so much information, all in Dawn's POV.

I'm breathing fast.

tesla321 May 13 2005, 15:28:47 UTC

And, hurting one of the boys, Spike, Mike...you've hit me in between the joints of my armor. Gah.

nandibble May 13 2005, 15:50:00 UTC

When one does the setup right, the delivery can be simple and direct. I'm glad it worked for you!

cindershadow May 13 2005, 16:32:07 UTC

Yes! Wow! I'm breathless and in pain but also hopeful (Mike's not dust, Dawn is going right to the blood) . . . and the Spike/Angel moment--superb, as usual. You can master so many different kinds of pacing, never losing the characterization as you do . . . amazing.

Wow. Again. rhondac May 13 2005, 17:19:48 UTC

I'll never understand how you manage to hit the reader between the eyes so unexpectedly. Damn I wish I was as good as you. :-(

Poor Mike. Just the thought of these two wet, separate Mike-pieces is emotionally disturbing.

I did love the piece between Angel and Spike. Kudos to Spike for pushing Angel as far as he did--as far as he could, since the Supplice. NOT impressed by Angel's attitude toward Mike. "Oh. That one." Can I kick him where it hurts? Please?

Rhonda